4/5
Actually, I really like this. It's very atmospheric and healing to the mind in the beginning. Very inspirational and provocative. This is definitely worth at least a rating of 4 from me just for that. The only thing that got irritating as the song went on was the small humming in the background. But afterwards, when the beat came in, the time crescendo was very effective for the song. The beat was great... but the melody afterwards sounded a little off at some points. Yet, I'd have to say my favorite part of the song is the switch of beat at 2:29, and the switch of melody at 2:42. The little vibraphones gave the song a lighter feel. Then you changed it once again, and it was still yet another excellent movement. Then, the ending fell sweetly, and BOOM! A weird, out-of-place kick. Besides that, this song is VERY well done. You composed it quite well! Just fix the small things and it'll be even better! Keep up the great work!
Take care,
Ka'eo