3/5
Hey, it sounds pretty neat, but doesn't sound a whole lot like Oldskool Hip-Hop. It sounds more technological than a breakbeat. There is no beat in this song anyway, which does make the scratching noise sound more like a wobbling synth wave, which is an effect you can get easily in most production programs nowadays. Also, your hi-hats are ineffective, and sound kind of bland. Try modifying your sounds by pitch or length to make it sound a little more like your own. Anyways, keep practicing, my friend!