3/5
Not the top-of-the-line, but it was good. It's sort of boring sometimes, or rather becomes hard to listen to because of the monotony of the instruments. You should modulate the sound a little or maybe provide a little more pitch bend for the lead. So, the tune wasn't so bad, especially in the beginning.
I like the beat, but just like everything else, it got old. The kick was probably just a little too loud for this song. Remember, you want to make the main point of this song the loudest, because that's what people will be listening to.
You did a good job overall, but there is lots of room for improvement. Keep going with your stuff, because I really do like it! =]
Take care,
Ka'eo C.