2/5
Eh, not too appealing to me, and apparently not very appealing to the other listeners who gave you low scores as well. I like the song Take Me On, but this didn't do it any justice. The melody is in there, but it isn't going down well. Also, the drums are a bit dry and uninteresting. Anyhow, just keep at the music! You have some potential!
Your friend,
Ka'eo
P.S. I did like the layout for the beat you had set up there. =]